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These are character descriptions from Eric L., 17, the first third party to read the full text of TAKE THE BREATH OUT OF ME.

Miki I would say is (obviously) the most complex character out of the three. I love how she reveals a part of her past that she'd never shared with Drake. She's smarter than she thinks she is, I love the whole part about the tattoo, and how it ties into her and Drake's relationship. She is like a puzzle with one piece missing, and that piece is Drake.

Drake. He's like Jesus in a way, coming to save Miki when she needs him most. Miki becomes a picture of what we look like when we forsake God when Drake was taken. He's a nice guy, but I found it was sometimes hard to see where his personality ended and where Strain A took over. He's strong, smart, no obvious character flaws. Me personally, I like him the best. He's a hero, plain and simple.

Harlow I would describe as being well intentioned, although he is more ofa 'end result outweighs the means' type of guy. I felt like there was some connection between him and 001. Someone from his past maybe? He seemed troubled somewhat.